My personal narrative is most likely going to be about my home and how its like growing up in New York, specifically Long Island. Sight in New York is very important, theres so many different building and places that make the city so beautiful as well as a tourist attraction. Long island nights especially in the summer are beautiful no matter where you are on the island. A summer night at the beach, specifically long beach is so peaceful. I like to sit and dig my feet into the sand, the heavy scent of salt water and the sound of the eater crashing on the rocks. I remember doing this less than a week before I was supposed to leave. It was nice to sit there talk as well as think about my past, present and future. For a moment time stopped and I wasn't thinking about moving to a different state miles away, I thought about all the memories I had made and all the friendships I developed throughout my 10 years living on the island.
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1. Was my writing clear about the topic?
When writing a paper, story, etc people have many different ways of executing it. When it comes to writing, there isn’t a set way of doing it, because every writer is different. Many people have different steps and plan out their writing, while others can be more relaxed and wing it. Personally I have planned out my writing but also have winged it, it ultimately depends on what type of writing you’re doing and the importance of it. When I have to write my more important papers I do tend to brainstorm or write my main ideas down to form structure. On the other hand the easier papers I can easily write without having to brainstorm. Usually when I write I tend to favor using my computer, simply because it’s faster for me but from time to time I do like using paper and a pen.Usually I don’t seriously revise my work, I tend to look over it a couple For me I can be the biggest procrastinator and I also have a pretty bad memory so when it comes to writing papers I can easily forget if I don’t set some sort of remind. That being said I want to be able to improve on my writing skills as well as my time management skills when it comes to writing a paper.
I am reviewing Elise Mitchell's portfolio. To me the pages are accessible and easy to locate. To find them, you can see at the top of the home page, right under the title. There are visual references to aide the audience and understand the text like the font and color scheme. Elise formatted the texts well by making them understandable and sticking to her theme. Her pictures went hand in hand with her writing. Not only this but the images helped enhance the website to make it more visually appealing. It is very easy to see what is being written on each page because it is titled clearly.The overall tone of the website is expressed in a professional way
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